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listener
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I drew her with pencil. What do you guys think?



It's kind of big but I don't know how to take out that empty white part of it. Constructive critiscm would be appreciated.

By the way I stole the picture that it was based on from boyd's journals. Very Happy
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TheAntrider
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It won't resize for me ...

But I like the shading and hair. No outline. Cool.

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I think it has a lot of resemblance to her (and is far better than I could ever do Very Happy ) but her face is a lot slimmer. Good job!
By the way, it resized fine for me.

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norad
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your proportions seem all out of wack.
the shading is very nice.
and it does resemble her.
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Thank you so much. I realize now that her eyes are a bit too big and some other stuff are off. For some reason, you don't realize your mistakes until it's too late. That's the case for me anyways.
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Good job. I like it. I do agree that some things are a little off, but what the hay?...I'ts an overall nice picture. Thanks for posting.
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listener wrote:
Thank you so much. I realize now that her eyes are a bit too big and some other stuff are off. For some reason, you don't realize your mistakes until it's too late. That's the case for me anyways.


I think it will help just moving the eyes down and in a bit. Just being off slightly with eyes can drastically affect appearances.

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Much better than I could do, =D

Although, the lips make her look a bit black, Cool

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McKenzies
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Very cool.

The eyes are maybe too big and too high, and the shading makes her face look dirty.

But I don't konw if I could do much better.

Wonderful job on her hair.

Keep drawing!
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Andrew
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People really dont realize how low eyes are. They are more in the middle of the head. Its good. Some of the shading and highlights are funky but im very picky with that sort of stuff. I should really start drawing more again.[/i]
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I like the shading on the upper lip.

The resemblance isn't very strong though.

DRMS_7888 wrote:
Although, the lips make her look a bit black, Cool


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McKenzies
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golly andrew wrote:
I like the shading on the upper lip.
Yeah... I bet it took them like 5 hours to do it.
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DeathRockBoy
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it looks a lot like joan baez.
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